Wednesday, June 28, 2006

Flight 91

I look up from my book
to see stewards wrestle a big man into the aisle.
This is it.

A doctor identifies herself,
as the man on the floor gradually unstiffens
from his fit.

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Cath said...

Where did this idea come from? A real experience? Do you need 'I think'-it may be more powerful by omitting these words.

ish said...

I have mostly been writing from real events with minor tweaks or omissions - this one too. Spot on with the comment on 'I think'. Thanks Cath!

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