Friday, May 16, 2008

Semicolon

He slows;
she passes.
He grins;
she blushes.
Wink
wink.

7 comments:

Alok said...

Good One :))

Alok

Inconsequential said...

Cool, another for the collection...

My favourite is still

...
Ellipsis
eclipses
words
it nixes.


:)

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

Love it.... Wonderful.

Best wishes
Annie

Jade said...

softly hot

ish said...

Thanks again for the visit alok.

inc, I think you like the ellipsis poem because it applies to you.
:-)

Thanks annie & loman...
I watch your writing ambitions with interest.

Thanks Annie. I learned things at your site. I so believe that so often less is more.

This poem was the only one of 13 'punctuation poems' not accepted by Carus Publishing for publication in one of their mags for children. "Too oblique." they said.

floreta said...

i love this one :D
very playful

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