tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post5395536093266843489..comments2023-09-18T22:21:38.693+10:00Comments on Verse Start: MealSteve Ishamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11496438591610659902noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-3311514913301264782007-08-25T20:50:00.000+10:002007-08-25T20:50:00.000+10:00was perusing thru some of ur old verse .... and i ...was perusing thru some of ur old verse .... and i feel honoured u read u Steve (sir)<BR/><BR/>will try and catch up with all ur posts ... immense food for thought ..<BR/><BR/>alokAlokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02888672505035649846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-79668757332327272962007-07-02T11:04:00.000+10:002007-07-02T11:04:00.000+10:00Speaking of food I tagged you for a meme, which yo...<A HREF="http://regainingparadise.wordpress.com/2007/07/02/restaurant-meme/" REL="nofollow">Speaking of food</A> I tagged you for a meme, which you can play in my comments unless you'd like to take the challenge to turn it into poetry...? We need more poems about food.missmellifluoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429578437601618663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-49434024122503741242007-06-03T02:20:00.000+10:002007-06-03T02:20:00.000+10:00Yes Patois, it seems the calm of simplicity is dis...Yes Patois, it seems the calm of simplicity is distilled from such manic complexity.<BR/><BR/>Crafty green poet, regina, thanks for the visits, comments.<BR/><BR/>inc, <BR/>I know what you mean. And thanks. Poets wants to bring unlikely stuff together to create a little jolt. But its a balancing act, and easily does not work.<BR/><BR/>[a} Thank you for your animated take on the lines, your appreciation of my intentions.Steve Ishamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11496438591610659902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-8577203589579888082007-05-29T07:27:00.000+10:002007-05-29T07:27:00.000+10:00Ooh I love the phrase "These few flavours old as o...Ooh I love the phrase "These few flavours old as orchards." It brings to mind apple cider and gorgeous Greek orchards.<BR/><BR/>This poem is brimming with flavour.<BR/><BR/>And the last line was a great finale!!! It makes me think of microscopic chains-upon-chains of molecules, so intricate and complex...<BR/>"simplicity's icing.."<BR/><BR/>Gorgeous!!!!![a}https://www.blogger.com/profile/06965188295886556899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-2384539470709328982007-05-29T05:11:00.000+10:002007-05-29T05:11:00.000+10:00Been trying to comment on this since it was posted...Been trying to comment on this since it was posted.<BR/><BR/>I really like it,<BR/>but,<BR/>it doesn't seem to sit right,<BR/><BR/>first three lines, lovely list of simple fair...<BR/>then leap into science...<BR/><BR/>yet, it does sort of work...<BR/><BR/>Oh well, never was a critic, and as I said, I like it.<BR/><BR/>Wish I was better with words and could explain...<BR/><BR/>Fortunately 'tis only my opinion :)<BR/><BR/>Good stuff Ish<BR/>Good stuff.Inconsequentialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03543390380268105131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-42580418682598233972007-05-28T13:01:00.000+10:002007-05-28T13:01:00.000+10:00You do pack such a punch into this post. I love th...You do pack such a punch into this post. I love the thought of the "invisible frenzy."Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-53545459607361184612007-05-28T04:09:00.000+10:002007-05-28T04:09:00.000+10:00Sounds yummy!Sounds yummy!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-9282040239597822792007-05-27T21:28:00.000+10:002007-05-27T21:28:00.000+10:00flavours old as orchards, sounds good!flavours old as orchards, sounds good!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-5708794377158501422007-05-27T20:44:00.000+10:002007-05-27T20:44:00.000+10:00Oh I am pleased you like that image with your chem...Oh I am pleased you like that image with your chemistry background and all. Thanks gautami!Steve Ishamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11496438591610659902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28237050.post-50771485505769179002007-05-27T14:28:00.000+10:002007-05-27T14:28:00.000+10:00"sanctified from the invisible frenzy within every..."sanctified from the invisible frenzy within every crumb<BR/>carbon molecule's cake dance beneath simplicity's icing."<BR/><BR/>Neeed it say any more?<BR/><BR/>You short posts are power packed!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.com